A Writer's Life

Caroline Clemmons writes historical and contemporary genre fiction. Historical romances, contemporary romantic suspense, mysteries, and paranormals are among her current works. Learn more about her at www.carolineclemmons.com

Friday, September 29, 2006

Writing--An Evolving Craft Is Still Subjective

My critique partner and I talk about writing and what we like and don't like about particular techniques. Not too long ago we were discussing dialogue in general and tag lines (attribution) specifically. We noticed that more and more writers are omitting "he said/she said" and using either action, body language, or the POV character's thoughts in place of an attribution tag. Jeanmarie and I prefer this method. I believe the story flows better and is more natural, pulling the reader into the scene. That's why I was surprised when a couple of writer friends mentioned they don't like this method. They believe "he said/she said" is invisible to the reader and prefer pared down scenes with as little description as possible--and don't care to read body language at all. Another multi-published friend mentioned that action such as "she nodded," "he shrugged" annoys her. She prefers an adverb such as "she said menacingly," but tag lines like that annoy me.

Writing for publication constantly changes and evolves. Spelling changes, comma use decreases, and so forth. Keeping up requires study and flexibility. It appears that no matter how much a writer studies craft and technique, personal likes and dislikes shape his or her writing. Even though being a writer changes the way a person reads for pleasure, each of us was a reader before he or she became a writer. What an author enjoys reading shapes his/her perception of how he/she should write. Keep reading good books!

4 Comments:

  • At 9:17 AM, Blogger Jeanmarie Hamilton said…

    I agree that what you read influences how you write. I'm reading a contemporary werewolf/vampire police romance right now. The hard-edged police characters remind me of the mystery books my dear husband enjoys reading. The characters in the mysteries he reads use profanity. In the past, romance writers haven't let their characters use a lot of profanity probably because the publishers didn't think their readers wanted to read it. Now it seems some romance publishers are offering their authors more freedom to write romances with contemporary characters who talk freely and use profanity. The romance is still there with the HEA. But I definitely see the influence of contemporary police/detective mystery writers.

     
  • At 5:54 AM, Blogger Sandy said…

    I like tags that work. If he said/she said works for the moment use it, if introspection works, use it, if adverb works, use it. My feeling is, if it doesnt' work, don't try to make it work...don't be lazy. Maybe that's why some of us have pet peeves...we know the writer could have done better.

     
  • At 6:28 PM, Blogger Sandy J said…

    I really like the body language and the POV character's thoughts in place of tags, etc. Works better for me. But that's why there is chocolate and vanilla ice cream, LOL!

     
  • At 11:06 AM, Blogger Amie Stuart said…

    because I'm too lazy to go find your email address MK Andrews has a christmas story coming out end of the month =)

    Cece

     

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