Showing posts with label adventure stories. Show all posts
Showing posts with label adventure stories. Show all posts

Monday, January 23, 2012

LONG WAY HOME, CIVIL WAR ADVENTURE ROMANCE

Three years ago, friends on a private loop decided to put together an anthology set around the Civil War and invited me to participate. That’s not my usual time period--I write either contemporary or historical set between 1870-1895. I wanted to be a good sport, though, so I joined the group.

We started with eleven authors, but people had to drop out for various reasons, including one who stomped off in a huff because the editor wouldn’t let her include her Mexican historical. At the end, six of us wrote novellas, and our anthology placed third in the EPIC. Woohoo!


Now that I have the rights back, I’ve republished this story on Kindle. It’s the only thing I’ve written which does not take place in Texas--not even a scene. It was fun to write, and I hope readers enjoy it. I based it on historical journals about the area of Northwest Georgia from which my ancestors migrated to Texas. Witherspoon is not a real town, but named after a Granbury, Texas antique mall where my daughter and I once had a booth. I used some family names, though: Parmelia, Sarah, Bailey, Hardeman, and McDonald (the Scots clan to which my Johnson family aligned). I also used the home description from my ancestors.


Don't this man have a sweet face?

Here’s a blurb from LONG WAY HOME.


Parmelia Bailey has promised to keep the women and younger brother of her family safe until the family's men return from War. That includes bringing her brother’s fiancée, Sarah Hardeman, and Sarah’s mother and sisters to stay at her grandmother’s home in town. Maybe she shouldn’t have stolen back her horses from the Yankees, but she could think of no other way to rescue the Hardeman women.



Darrick McDonald waited four years to return to Witherspoon, Georgia and Parmelia. Who would have dreamed war would bring him back? He had to protect Parmelia from a renegade who’d vowed to make her sorry she’d turned down his proposal. Darrick prayed he wasn’t too late.


Here’s an excerpt from LONG WAY HOME:


At last, she turned the buggy into her grandparents’ drive and pulled around to the back. With a huge sigh, she stopped at the carriage house. Surely a week had passed since she caught her horses last night. All she wanted now was to crawl in bed and sleep for days, pretend the war never happened. She couldn’t relax yet, not until the horses were back with those Yankee scoundrels.


Sarah, let’s see your mother and sisters inside. After that, Rob and I will deal with the chickens and cow.” Parmelia’s hands shook as she climbed out of the buggy. Fatigue, relief, and fear turned her limbs to jam.


She walked Sarah and her family to the back door where Grammy and Mama took over.


Parmelia returned to the carriage house. “Rob, help me unhitch the horses and put their bridles on so I can take them back.


Why don’t I do that.” Darrick McDonald stepped from the shadows. He appeared calm, until she looked at his face.


Parmelia was surprised sparks didn’t shoot from his dark eyes and ignite the entire carriage house. She clutched her throat, hoping a way out of this predicament would come to her. How had he known to come here, to wait for her?


Darrick, you—you gave me a fright.”


Did I? Perhaps you have a guilty conscience.” He freed one of the horses.


When did you come back?” She fought for an idea, but none came to her.


Late yesterday.” He walked back and forth beside Lady. “Funny thing, you having two horses after the Army confiscated all the livestock in town. Another coincidence, two Army horses went missing overnight.”


Did they?”


He stopped and gave her a piercing look.


She gave up with a sigh. “I can explain.”


I’m listening.” His eyes were still dark with anger.


My brother’s fiancée. You remember Sarah Hardeman? I had to bring her and her family to town. I—I had no way to do that without a team.”


Rob added, “These are our horses anyway. You low down, yellow-bellied Yankees stole them from us.


Oh, Lord. Leave it to her brother to make things worse.


Hush, Rob. Give me the bridles. Put the cow in the barn then come help me with these chickens.”


He pouted and handed over the tack. “Oh, all right. I never get to hear anything good.” Rob untied the cow and stomped toward the barn.


So, you’re a Yankee officer now.”


Captain.” Darrick crossed his arms. “I’m waiting for an explanation, Parmelia.”


Her temper conquered her good sense, and she stepped toward him. “You’ve got your nerve, coming here wearing that uniform, you...you traitor.


He stepped forward until they were almost touching. “Call me what you will, but you’re the one who stole two horses in a time of war.”


She refused to retreat. “How can you accuse me of stealing, when you Yankees have taken over our town?”


Because you did steal them, and you weren’t even clever about it. I followed their tracks to your grandparents’ home. You do realize that with a less sympathetic Colonel, they could lose their home?”


Dear heaven, she hadn’t considered her grandparents if she were caught.


No!” She took a step backward. “I was going to return them. Rob’s right, they are ours. They know me, so they were eager to come to me.”


He pulled a small, withered apple from his pocket.


Rats, she must have dropped it, one of the few from their store of fruit in the cellar.


Darrick held the apple in front of her nose. “Looks to me as if you coaxed them away.”


She sighed, “Maybe I did, but it was only to use them for a little while. Sarah and her family were in great peril.”


He tossed the apple from one hand to the other, but stared at her face. “Are you crazy? You could have been killed.


She grabbed the apple from him. “Sarah, her mother, and sisters could have been murdered and their home burned. We barely got away in time as it is.”


If you had bothered to consult the Colonel, he would have sent soldiers for them. As it turns out, I would have taken my men and gone.”


Are you crazy? You could have been killed,” she echoed him.


Shocked at the concern in her voice and in her heart, she continued, “Um, I mean, they might not have recognized you and could have shot you. Or, that man that tried to take my horse could have killed you.”


Oh, no, she hadn’t meant to tell that last part.


He grew angrier and grabbed her arms. “What do you mean?"


She tried to twist away. “Nothing.”


Parmelia Bailey, who tried to take your horse?” He turned her to face him.


Refusing to meet his gaze, she stammered, “There, um, there was a man in the woods, a ways north of the Mitchell’s house. He…um, he jumped at me and tried to take Beauty, but Rob and I got away.”


You are the stubbornest, orneriest woman I’ve ever known. Don’t you realize what could have happened to you?”


It crossed my mind,” she snapped and raised her face.


If you were mine, I’d, I’d...”


Yours? You moved away and left me, remember? And now you’re a Yankee officer.” Lord, she shouldn’t have reminded him she’d loved him. Worse, she still loved him.


She willed tears not to fall. Keep your anger up, don’t let him know how he hurt you.


You know why I left Witherspoon. You know I had no choice.”


There’s always a choice.” And she would have chosen to go with him, if only he’d asked, even if she had been only sixteen.


Like you chose to steal these horses?”


She shrugged away from his grasp. “Steal? Soldiers stole them from us. Do you understand the term borrow? That’s what I did.”


In times of war, the government has the power to confiscate items from civilians. Do you understand that?”


Call it what you wish, it’s still stealing when you take what’s not yours and keep it.”


Maybe we’re only borrowing your horses.”


She thought his mouth twitched to hide a smile. His humor only irked her more.


Like you Yankees borrowed from the stores in town so we can’t even buy supplies—that is, if we had money. Which we don’t.”


He smiled. “I heard you had plenty of those Confederate dollars.”


Oh, you...you Yankees make me so mad! Take my horses and leave.” She turned and stomped toward the house.


He called, “Aren’t you going to invite me in to say hello to the family? Maybe you could bake me an apple pie.”


She slammed the kitchen door and leaned against it. His laughter floated around her.


From the front of the house, she heard Mrs. Hardeman complaining and Mamma and Grammy’s soft, soothing answers. She wondered how much of Mrs. Hardeman’s grousing they’d have to endure.


Parmelia pushed away from the door, and then remembered those dratted chickens. Peeking through the curtains, she saw Darrick leading the horses away. His long, lean body looked good, his walk a confident swagger. Dark brown hair caught the sunlight. Lordy, he was better looking than he had been four years ago when he lived in Witherspoon.


When he’d touched her just now, she’d sizzled. She’d wanted to throw herself in his arms and have him reassure her, kiss her, love her. How could he create these sensations inside her when he’d abandoned her four years ago? When now he sided with their enemies?


She jumped when Sarah came up to her.


Parmelia, is something wrong?”


I—I just remembered the chickens is all. I’ll get Rob to help me get them down and into the chicken coop.”


Nonsense. My sisters and I will do it. You look all worn out. You must have ridden most of the night.”


She shrugged. “I’m all right. We started for your place close to midnight.”


Sarah’s dark eyes sparkled. “Did you really take those horses from the Yankees?”


Yes, but they’re on their way back to those thieves now. Darrick McDonald was waiting for them in Grammy’s barn.”


Darrick?” Sarah touched Parmelia’s arm. “Oh, Parmelia. Is he still as handsome?”


She sighed, hating to admit the truth. “More. And taller. He sure fills out his uniform, too, but it’s blue.


Oh.” Sarah paused. “But he’s here, and you talked to him. That’s something, isn’t it?”


Before Parmelia had to answer, Rob slammed inside the kitchen. “That old cow’s still upset. Am I supposed to milk her or what?”


I’ll get the pail for you.” Parmelia retrieved it from the screened in porch. “The stool’s still in the barn.” She clasped her hands. “Fresh milk. Oh, that will be wonderful. We’ve been without it for a month.”


Rob called, “We got to have hay.”


Maybe she can eat the lawn tomorrow. I’ll try to barter some hay.” But who had any supplies except the Yankees? Sighing, she went back into the kitchen. She simply could not deal with another crisis today.


I took off my extra clothes, but my hair’s a mess.” Sarah stood at a small mirror over the washstand and smoothed curls of brown hair from her face. “I don’t know about you, but I don’t think my teachers at Thorndike Academy of Young Women would approve of my appearance.”


Parmelia looked at herself over Sarah’s shoulder, then gasped. What must Darrick have thought of her? She told herself she didn’t care then admitted she did. She’d been so careful about her appearance when he’d called on her years ago. He must think she’d turned into a hoyden. Peering at her rough hands and broken nails, she thought maybe she had. Oh, what did it matter? Forcing back tears and regrets, she pulled at her men’s britches and curtsied to Sarah. “I don’t think anyone from Mrs. Carrington’s School for Young Ladies would even speak to me.”


They broke into giggles and went in search of Katie and Nancy.


I hope you'll want to purchase LONG WAY HOME, a bargain at only 99 cents. Remember that this is a novella, so it's a fast read at just under 20,000 words. The buy link at Amazon is:


http://www.amazon.com/LONG-WAY-HOME-ebook/dp/B005HQYUSK/ref=sr_1_5?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1327094984&sr=1-5

Smashwords is http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/108471

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Thursday, July 21, 2011

BOOK REVIEW - FINDING KATE HUNTLEY, BY THERESA RAGAN

Want a free romantic suspense that will have you on the edge of your seat? FINDING KATE HUNTLEY, by Theresa Ragan, is a romantic suspense that combines romance, murder, and adventure in a fast-paced read. Theresa has graciously offered a free e-book to each person who comments. Please be certain to include your email in your comment, because you will be so glad to get a copy of this book!



When Kate Huntley was fifteen, she saw her father murdered during a Caribbean vacation off the coast of Haiti. He barely managed to save Kate after he fought off his attacker. Who would harm her father? He was a harmless scientist working to find a cure for AIDS. She lives to avenge him, and remains in Haiti's tough backstreets--where life is hard and lives come cheap. She manages to remain under the murderer(s) radar.

Ten years later, while gaining mental and physical strength with her continued determination, she works for a charter business in Port-au-Prince. But she has not yet found her father’s killer nor avenged her father’s death. Every day she thinks of him and heeds her father’s final words, “Trust no one!” She vows she will never be caught helpless again and has turned into a real kickass heroine. Although she is strong and capable, there’s a sense of inner vulnerability to her too that I found endearing. Without her knowledge, her image is caught on a routine satellite photo that alerts the FBI. They want to talk to her about her father's death and why she's remained missing.

Jack Coffey is a rookie FBI agent sent to find missing Kate and bring her home to the States. At the same time, he is being framed. He realizes he’s been naive and feels foolish, but decides to fight back. Now he trusts no one--something he and Kate have in common. He is a charming man, and a real hunk. Kate discovers him following her after being told a man has asked for her. She confronts him, and their race begins. He doesn’t understand why she won’t trust him; she doesn’t understand why he trusts people who have betrayed him.

The fast-paced plot sweeps the reader along with barely time for a deep breath. I loved the action-filled suspense that kept me guessing to the climax. I also loved the relationship between Kate and Jack as it built from sex and developed into a true romance. FINDING KATE HUNTLEY is a book that will please readers on many levels. I recommend it highly to anyone who reads romance, mystery, suspense, and adventure.

Theresa Ragan
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Thanks to Theresa for her generosity. And thanks for providing me with a copy of FINDING KATE HUNTLEY for this review. I loved it.

Wednesday, April 20, 2011

BOOK REVIEW OF PAPER WOMAN BY SUZANNE ADAIR

Do you read historical fiction? Do you like adventure stories? Do you read books that include Native Americans? Do you enjoy stories with romance between heroic characters? Do you want to win a Kindle? More about that later.


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 If you answered yes to even one of these questions, PAPER WOMAN, by Suzanne Adair, is a book you will love. From the first page, Ms Adair’s story of one woman’s quest during the American Revolution will pull you into the pages (or your e-reader). This is not a pedantic historical treatise. Ms Adair’s ability to bring the era to life amazed me. She weaves historic detail so well that the reader forgets he or she is gaining new insights into the American Revolution. In fact, I felt I was standing next to the heroine and experiencing each obstacle with her. No wonder Suzanne Adair won the Patrick D. Smith Literature Award.

Sophie Barton is only thirty-three, but she is already twice widowed and soon to be a grandmother. Sophie is “the paper woman” because of her job assisting her father with his printing press. She also keeps the accounts for their Alton, Georgia business. Her father is busy stirring up rebellion against the Crown at the same time Sophie is being courted by a British officer whose intentions are less than honorable. Daniel, Sophie’s charming brother, spends his time courting women and winning games of chance. Her sister Susana is a self-involved young matron interested primarily in what might be due her and her family.


But life quickly changes and Sophie and her family are in danger. Like a female Indiana Jones, she is determined to solve the puzzle of who wants her arrested for treason and who has plotted against her family. I won’t include any spoilers, so I won’t describe her quest, accompanied by the men who love her and offer their loyalty.

PAPER WOMAN is a book I enthusiastically recommend and I rate it five stars! I couldn’t stop reading until my eyes were so tired I couldn’t focus. The next morning, I hurried my routine so I could finish this captivating tale. PAPER WOMAN is available in e-download from http://www.smashwords.com/  and in print from http://www.dramtreebooks.com/

 

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Thursday, May 27, 2010

Family History as Story Material

Don't forget, dear friends, my May 31 prize giveaway is drawing near!!! Each comment on a May blog enters you in the drawing. Signing up as a follower counts a second entry. Be sure and include your email address and tell me if you also signed up as a follower. I'll draw early on June 1st.

Now to talking about family history as story material. You realize, I'm sure, that I don't want you to write a book in which all your relatives appear in their most annoying form. No, we do have to continue to be a part of our family. My intent is to suggest that events in the life of someone in your family may spark an idea for a character or a plot. For instance, my grandmother once told me a short anecdote about a girl her age in her little village in Tennessee. The girl had a horrid life and the other kids taunted her mercilessly. The girl quit school rather than be subjected to the ridicule. My grandmother's story touched me and I thought how nice it would have been if that little girl had found a better life after her years of misery. That sparked the character of Pearl in THE MOST UNSUITABLE WIFE.  

Darling 1 has decided to write a nonfiction book about an event that happened to my grandfather, who had to shoot someone to defend himself and his family. Unfortunately, the man he killed was his wife's uncle. Not a pleasant story, but one that began years before at the end of the Civil War with family animosity. Apparently, my grandparents were from feuding families and left Georgia for Texas in an attempt to escape the anymosity.

I am amazed at the number of historical writers who use events in their family. My friend Jeanmarie Hamilton has a fascinating family tree that includes many early Texas settlers. Ashley Kath-Bilsky's ancestor was an early Pinkerton agent.

Family lore can apply to contemporary writers, too. How many of us see tragic things happen to relatives and recognize a chain of events as a cause. Why not rewrite life and create a happy ending? 

What about your family history? I'll bet you have the seeds for innumerable stories.