This is my first experience with writing for a
Kindle World. Mine is Debra Holland’s Montana Sky Series. Another first for me,
writing a book set in Montana. Writers have to keep stretching and engaging in
new forms of their craft so they don’t go stale.
Raising my hand and freely admitting that this book
about ate my lunch. While I love Debra Holland’s books, I had to reread her
Mail-Order Brides of the West to jot down all the names and descriptions. I
believe I got them true to her portrayal.
When the world is one I’ve created, I have the
setting and characters firmly in my mind. While I remembered the characters
from Debra’s books, that didn’t mean I could describe them. I also had to
visualize the setting she’d laid out. Fortunately, one of the other authors in
the world, Lou Nelson, worked with Debra and created a map. What a help!
When I saw stretching, I really stretched with AMANDA'S RANCHER. I worried so much writing this book that I about
made myself sick. However, my beta readers told me it’s a great book. You can
imagine my relief!
My story in this world is AMANDA’S RANCHER. Here’s
the blurb:
One desperate young woman.
A chance meeting.
A life-changing outcome.
Growing up in a brothel, Mara
O'Sullivan battled public disdain and contempt, but always remained
kind-hearted and gracious. After testifying against vicious bank
robbers, her life is threatened and Mara must find sanctuary far from
everything she knows.
One train ride changes her life as
she fatefully meets a half-sister and a niece she never knew existed. But
when circumstances end her sister's life, Mara makes a promise that she'll
raise her niece as her own and take her sister's place
as Preston Kincaid's mail-order-bride. As Mara and Preston
grow closer, their marriage no longer seems like a ruse, but a
relationship of love, passion, and desire.
Mara's past comes back to haunt her
and she finds herself in danger—will her new husband forgive Mara's deceit
and protect her as his own?
Here’s an excerpt of AMANDA’S
RANCHER:
They reached the church and Preston
jumped down from the wagon and came around to help her alight. With a smile, he
lifted Iris high over his head before he set her on the ground. Her giggle
brought tears to Amanda’s eyes.
That was the first time she’d ever heard
her daughter make the girlish sound. Iris had smiled, spoken, but never laughed
until she met Preston Kincaid. For that alone, Amanda would be the best wife
she knew how to be.
Inside the church, Mrs. Norton handed
Amanda a bouquet of daisies secured with a white ribbon. The interior was plain
with wooden benches and an altar raised one step above the rest of the floor.
Although there were several windows, none had stained-glass as did the churches
she’d seen in Georgia.
The minister was waiting at the front of
the church and wore a black frock coat and matching string tie. His brown hair
and beard were thickly streaked with gray. He stood at a simple lectern with
what looked like a Bible in one hand while he conversed with another man.
Amanda was surprised only one other
person besides Reverend and Mrs. Norton were in the sanctuary. She’d supposed
Preston had many friends in the area and thought at least his ranch hands would
attend. The second man turned and proved to be an older version of her groom
who came forward to greet her.
Preston cupped her elbow. “Amanda and
Iris, this is my father. Most folks call him Tom, but I call him Papa.”
Amanda smiled at the handsome man who
must be around fifty. He was tall, but maybe an inch shorter than his son.
Silver sprinkled the same dark hair. “May I call you Papa, too?”
He beamed his pleasure and his blue eyes
crinkled at the corners. “I’d be honored. And in the absence of your father,
may I walk you down the aisle?”
“Would you? I’d be ever so grateful.”
She laid her hand on his arm. Nerves had set in and she needed his support or
her knees might give way.
Preston said, “Iris, why don’t you stand
with me while my papa walks Mama to meet us?”
Iris shook her head. “Mommy, not my old
mama?”
Preston frowned. “Old mama?”
Panic sent bile into her throat that
threatened to choke her. Don’t throw up on your wedding dress. “Perhaps you
remember my mother recently died.”
Sympathy shone from his blue eyes. “Of
course.” He took Iris’ hand in his and strode to the front.
Mrs. Norton began playing the piano. She
nodded toward Amanda. Papa Kincaid gently led her up the aisle.
Walking toward her husband, Amanda was
conscious of Preston’s stare, as if he could see into her mind and knew her for
an impostor. Although he held Iris’ hand, the intensity of his blue gaze
unnerved her. She wondered if he was disappointed or if he were as numb as she.
Thankful for the presence of her future
father-in-law beside her, she tightened her hold on Mr. Kincaid’s arm.
In response, he patted her hand her
where it laid on his sleeve. Without looking at her, he whispered. “Steady as
you go. We’re almost there.”
Iris gave a tiny wave and Amanda
couldn’t resist smiling at the child. The little girl truly was a blessing.
Focusing on Iris gave Amanda a target she could face.
When they reached the front, Mrs. Norton
ceased playing. Preston took the bouquet from Amanda’s hands. “Iris, would you
hold this for Mommy so she and I can be married?”
Iris looked at him adoringly and reached
to receive the flowers. Reverend Norton opened his Bible and began the
ceremony. Preston took Amanda’s hands in his. She was conscious of his
calluses, but also of the size and strength of his palms dwarfing hers.
When the minister indicated, Preston
slipped a ring onto her finger. This new
one belongs to me, even if my groom doesn’t know my true name.
After the ceremony, Preston brushed his
lips gently against hers.
Iris clapped a hand across her mouth in
surprise then said, “Mommy? That man kissed you.”
Preston knelt eye-to-eye with her. “I’m
your new Daddy, remember? Mommy and I were just married and now I can kiss her
whenever she says it’s okay. Do you think you can call me Daddy?”
Iris nodded. “Are you gonna kiss me
too?”
He smiled broadly. “I certainly am.” He
leaned forward and gave her a loud smack on the cheek.
The child giggled. Twice in one day this
kind man had made Iris happy. Amanda owed Preston all her wifely devotion.
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2 comments:
What a lovely scene! I'm looking forward to reading this book.
Pretty book cover. Loved the excerpt.
Sue B
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