Shadows of Damascus
by Lilas Taha
Writing Quirks, by Lilas Taha
One of my own writing quirks is that I tend to stick to a scene or a chapter until I get the idea out. It doesn’t have to be perfect, but as long as I have the details down, I can finally leave my desk and take a breather. I go for a long walk, talk to my characters on the way, ask them questions about what I’ve written, then come back and inject what I find missing. It sounds crazy, and I’m sure that’s how it seems to people passing me by on the walking trail. Sometimes, when the topic is too sticky or embarrassing, I head for the bathroom instead and conduct my conversations there. I’m not crazy, I assure you. But listening to my words through the characters’ articulations helps me get a better feel for them, and paint a clearer picture.
Sometimes, after I’ve worked on a scene for a while, I brew a cup of coffee and stare into space for the time it takes me to drink it. The tension flows out, and my mind lets go. It’s like mental yoga. Other times, I watch some nonsense TV series, one episode after another to clear my head (thank God for Netflix and HBOGO). Then I go back to my work in progress, and I write some more.
I go to my critique group, present what I have, lick my wounds, and go back to revising and reworking what I’ve written. The process is time consuming and, sometimes, exhausting. Yet, oh, so rewarding!
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SHADOWS OF DAMASCUS Blurb:
Bullet wounds, torture and oppression aren’t the only things that keep a man—or a woman—from being whole.
Debt. Honor. Pain. Solitude. These are things wounded war veteran Adam Wegener knows all about. Love—now, that he is not good at. Not when love equals a closed fist, burns, and suicide attempts. But Adam is one who keeps his word. He owes the man who saved his life in Iraq. And he doesn’t question the measure of the debt, even when it is in the form of an emotionally distant, beautiful woman.
Yasmeen agreed to become the wife of an American veteran so she could flee persecution in war-torn Syria. She counted on being in the United States for a short stay until she could return home. There was one thing she did not count on: wanting more.
Is it too late for Adam and Yasmeen?
SHADOWS OF DAMASCUS was released by Soul Mate Publishing January, 2014.
SHADOWS OF DAMASCUS Excerpt:
PROLOGUE
YASMEEN
Damascus, Syria
Summer 2006
The seductive fragrance of Damascus roses drifted through the open window and flirted with fifteen-year-old Yasmeen’s olfactory senses. The potent flowers in her neighbor’s yard delivered the best awakening. She loved beginnings, especially early, mid-summer mornings like these. Stretching across the bed, her imagination raced with possibilities for the promising day.
Thursday. The day her older brother’s friends visited and stayed well into the evening. Yasmeen ticked off potential visitors in her head, dashing young university students who loved to talk politics with Fadi. Today, she would do her best to discover the name of the quietest member in the group, the thin one with round-rimmed glasses. On her nightstand, the sketch she worked on during the last visit waited for his name, and more details around the eyes.
Peeling off the covers, she tip-toed to the window. Lively noises matched her optimistic mood. Nightingales sang greetings. Clanging dishes and pots resonated from surrounding houses beyond high walls. Mothers called out for their daughters to get breakfast ready. Men’s deep voices describing fresh fruits and vegetables with tempting traditional phrases drifted above hidden alleys. One vendor claimed his cucumbers were small as baby fingers, and likened his ripe apples to a virgin bride’s cheeks. Another boasted his plum peaches shed their covers without enticement, and his shy eggplants hid well in a moonless night.
Yasmeen succumbed to the enlivening chaos spilling in from her bedroom window, her own special and personal opening to the world. Tilting her head back, she exposed her face and neck to the sun, allowing its invigorating rays to paint her cheeks.
Today, her mother told her she would be allowed to take a coffee tray into Fadi’s room once all his friends arrived. What would she wear? She should tell her best friend Zainab to stop by earlier than usual to go through her wardrobe. She could help her decide. Perhaps one of Fadi’s friends would notice her. More than one? Why not?
Draping her arms on the windowsill, she looked at the neighbor’s yard, counting the blooming roses, a ritual she performed each morning since the season started. In the north corner of the largest flowerbed, two violet buds grabbed her attention, their delicate petals about to unfold. Once they came to full bloom, their deep purple color would dominate the landscape.
A knock sounded at her door.
“I am awake.”
Her father walked in. “Good. We have work to do.” He held a hammer in one hand and a couple of boards in the other. “Move aside, Yasmeen.” He approached the window.
She stepped away and pointed at the boards. “What do you need those for?”
Her father closed the windowpanes, locked them, placed one board across the frame, and hammered it in place.
“What are you doing?”
“This window is not to be opened again, child.”
She could not believe her ears. “Why?”
“Neighbors moved out last night.” Her father nailed the second board in place. “Mukhabarat took over their house.”
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| Lilah Taha, Author |
Lilas Taha is a writer at heart, an electrical engineer by training, and an advocate for domestic abuse victims by choice. She was born in Kuwait to a Syrian mother and a Palestinian father, and immigrated to the U.S. as a result of the Gulf war in 1990. She earned a master’s degree in Human Factors Engineering from the University of Wisconsin- Madison. There, Lilas met her beloved husband and true friend, and moved with him to Sugar Land, Texas to establish a family. She is the proud mother of a daughter and a son. Instead of working in an industrial field, she applied herself to the field of social safety, working with victims of domestic violence.
Pursuing her true passion for creative writing, Lilas brings her professional interests, and her Middle Eastern background together in her debut fictional novel, Shadows of Damascus.
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5 comments:
Thank you for hosting me on your blog.
I greatly appreciate your writing style Lilas. Thanks for the glimpse into your creative process.
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I love finding debut authors.
i enjoy learning about authors that are new to me.lilas good luck with your book
Thanks for sharing an excerpt from your book. I felt I was right there with the characters. Good job. I can't wait to get started on your book.
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