Friday, December 19, 2014


Nellie (The Brides of San Francisco I) by Cynthia Woolf

Review of NELLIE by Caroline Clemmons

My review of NELLIE
by Caroline Clemmons

NELLIE is the first of award winning and bestselling author Cynthia Woolf’s new series, The Brides of San Francisco. I admit I’m a fan of this author and have read her numerous titles. When I started reading this book, I believed I knew exactly what would happen, but Cynthia surprised me with fresh twists and turns.

The heroine of NELLIE is, obviously, Nellie Wallace. The story opens in New York at the end of the Civil War when a soldier arrives to tell Nellie she’s now a widow. Her husband, Robert, died without ever seeing their youngest child, Violet. Nellie’s son, Henry, is devoted to his father. Henry remembers his father, who showed him a good deal of attention.

Nellie and her children have been living in a guest house on her interfering in-laws’ property with an acrimonious relationship between the in-laws and Nellie. She knows she can’t tolerate living there now that she’s a widow. To escape, she checks in with a marriage broker, specifying she wants a kind man who won’t mind a woman with children and will treat them well.

Serendipitously, the marriage broker has received a letter and generous amount of money from a man in San Francisco who requests a woman with children to make him an instant family man for business purposes. He states the woman will need to be his hostess when he hosts business dinners. Nellie believes she has found the perfect solution to her problem because he lives on the opposite side of the country from her mean-spirited and disapproving  in-laws.

Nellie and her children are instantly accepted by Blake Malone, especially by little Violet. The little girl is delighted by Blake and instantly calls him Daddy. Nellie is relieved that handsome Blake is considerate and appears the perfect husband.

Oh, yes, there are a couple of drawbacks. You know if anything seems too good to be true, it is. Blake owns a successful saloon, not a business of which Nellie approves. He needs the family in order to acquire the respectability required for a new venture for family entertainment. That fact offers Nellie a balm to his current business. The major flaw in his plan is an employee, Maddie Singer, with whom Blake had an affair before his marriage. Maddie is determined to continue the relationship.

I can’t tell you more without spoiling the story, and I don’t want to do that. You need to read this book. I hope Cynthia will have Blake’s partner, Nick Cartwright, as the hero of her next book. I’ll be watching for her next release. I hope you will too.

Quick Facts                                        
Release Date:  November, 2014                
Genre: Historical Romance. Western                                              
Formats to buy: Paperbacks and all ebook formats

NELLIE Synopsis
Nellie Wallace is a young widow with two children. In post civil-war New York, the men are scarce and none want the burden of a wife with children. Her dead husband's family is wealthy, and cruel. Desperate to escape their influence, and eager for a home, a husband, and a stable life for her children, Nellie decides to make a new life in San Francisco as a mail order bride.

Saloon owner Blake Malone is a bachelor and likes it that way. He worked hard for everything he has, but the San Francisco City Council won’t approve his plans to build a family emporium unless he is a family man himself. The solution? A mail order bride from New York who will bring him a ready-made family, stability, and the council's approval.

Blake expects his future wife to care for his home and, other than helping him impress the city council, to stay out of his business. He expects life as usual. What he gets is an unexpected desire to win Nellie's heart, a dangerous threat to his new bride, and a rich benefactor determined to steal his new family out from under him.  Blake believed his battle for success a hard one. But he will discover that the battle to win Nellie's heart and keep his family safe is going to take everything he's got.

Excerpt from NELLIE:
 April 28, 1865


If only she could fix her problems with a needle and thread she’d be set. Nellie looked up from the socks she was darning toward the knocking on the front door.Who could that be? She set aside the socks, straightened her dress, checked her reflection in the mirror on the wall in the hall, patted her blond hair back into place and then answered the door.“Mrs. Robert Wallace?” asked the soldier in dress uniform who stood at attention on her front porch.

Oh, God. No. Please. No. “Yes,” she said, trying to keep the tremor from her voice. “I…I’m Mrs. Wallace.

 The young soldier handed her an envelope. “I regret to have to inform you that Lieutenant Robert Wallace was killed at the Battle of Appomattox on April 8, 1865. I’m sorry for your loss, Mrs. Wallace.”\

Nellie didn’t know what to say over the lump in her throat. She always knew this could happen—from the first moment Robert joined, to his last farewell eight months before Violet was born.“I, uh, thank you, Officer…”

“Black, ma’am. Sergeant Black.”

“Thank you for letting me know, Sergeant.” Her grip tightened on the door knob. “I…I have to sit down now.”

“Of course, ma’am. Do you need help?”

Nellie shook her head. “No. Thank you. I’ll be alright.”

The man saluted her, turned and walked down the sidewalk to the waiting carriage.How many of these calls did he have to make today? Was I the only one? I doubt it. Not in a city the size of New York. She closed the door and leaned against the wall next to it, her legs no longer able to support her, she slid to the floor. Tears left salty trails on her face, but for the life of her she couldn’t remember crying. Screaming, cursing God, yes, but crying, no. 

Even though our marriage wasn’t what I’d dreamed it could have been when I was a child, I shall miss him. He had his good side, he was funny and could make her laugh. He was gentle every where except…no I will not think about that now. I endured and have two beautiful children.

How am I to tell Henry his father is dead? Violet was just a baby and didn’t know her daddy but Henry… Her son missed his father something fierce. Robert had doted on Henry. They spent so much time together that Henry cried for days when his father left the last time. And now I have to tell him his father is never coming home. How do I do that?

She wiped her cheeks with the backs of her hands, took the hanky from her apron pocket and blew her nose.  No need to put it off. The task would be difficult enough, without waiting and making it harder. Perhaps she and Henry could grieve together. In any case, she needed to be strong for her son and daughter. She was all they had now.Taking a deep breath, she mounted the stairs to the play room and her children.
Get to know the author:
Cynthia Woolf, Author
Cynthia Woolf is the award winning and best-selling author of ten historical western romance books, one short story, and one novella in the anthology Lost in a Kiss, with more books on the way. She was born in Denver, Colorado and raised in the mountains west of Golden. She spent her early years running wild around the mountain side with her friends.
Their closest neighbor was one quarter of a mile away, so her little brother
was her playmate and her best friend. That fierce friendship lasted until his
death in 2006.
Cynthia was and is an avid reader. Her mother was a librarian and brought new
books home each week. This is where young Cynthia first got the storytelling
bug. She wrote her first story at the age of ten. A romance about a little boy
she liked at the time.
Cynthia loves writing and reading romance. Her first western romance Tame A
Wild Heart, was inspired by the story her mother told her of meeting Cynthia’s
father on a ranch in Creede, Colorado. Although Tame A Wild Heart takes place
in Creede that is the only similarity between the stories. Her father was a
cowboy not a bounty hunter and her mother was a nursemaid (called a nanny now) not the ranch owner.

Cynthia credits her wonderfully supportive husband Jim and the great friends she's made at CRW for saving her sanity and allowing her to explore her creativity.



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johnthuku0 said...

Thank you so much for hosting. Very interesting excerpt.

Mary Preston said...

What a wonderful read this promises to be.

woolfcindy said...

Thank you for having me on your blog today Caroline and for the wonderful review. I appreciate it very much.

Caroline Clemmons said...

Cindy, I love your books and eagerly anticipate the next in this series.

Caroline Clemmons said...
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Maria Malaveci said...

Sounds fantastic!

Bonnylynn said...

thanks for the chance!

Anonymous said...

I LOVED your Matchmaker & Co. Series

Unknown said...

This sounds like a great read. LOVING the cover.

Unknown said...

I fell for the excerpt. Now I'm in love with the book! Thank you =D

Victoria Alexander said...

sounds like an awesome read! Thanks for sharing I'm looking forward to checking it out.

Unknown said...

I think this sounds like a book I would love to read!

dwharton1 said...

Hi Cindy, I can't wait to read "Nellie". My favorite genre is Historical fiction westerns. Especially runaway or mail-order brides. Happy to make your acquaintance.

Donna/BookTiger :)